tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-67472085102584719602024-02-06T21:52:57.760-05:00Always Searching . . .Once in awhile mental meanderings along the way.Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger178125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-56679562911318584152012-11-14T09:18:00.001-05:002012-11-14T09:18:26.941-05:00QuickBooks fails to print in Windows 8? Cannot email pdf?<div class="wlWriterHeaderFooter" style="float:none; margin:0px; padding:4px 0px 4px 0px;"><iframe src="http://www.facebook.com/widgets/like.php?href=http://dhrknss.blogspot.com/2012/11/quickbooks-fails-to-print-in-windows-8.html" scrolling="no" frameborder="0" style="border:none; width:450px; height:80px"></iframe></div><p>Here’s a quick fix.</p> <p> </p> <p>Reinstall the XPS Document Writer:</p> <ol> <li>From the Windows Start menu, choose Printers.  </li> <li>From the toolbar, click the Add a printer button, and choose Add a local printer. </li> <li>Click to chose the Use an existing port option. </li> <li>Choose XPSPort: (Local Port) and click Next. </li> <li>From the manufacturer list, choose Microsoft, then Microsoft XPS Document Writer. </li> <li>Click Next   When you’re finished QuickBooks will work.  This works with Windows 8 Pro and QuickBooks 2012.</li> </ol> Unknownnoreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-83348768401331876142012-10-29T08:02:00.001-04:002012-11-02T07:58:16.320-04:00Windows 8: 10 Reasons to Stay with Windows 7<div class="wlWriterHeaderFooter" style="float:none; margin:0px; padding:4px 0px 4px 0px;"><iframe src="http://www.facebook.com/widgets/like.php?href=http://dhrknss.blogspot.com/2012/10/windows-8-10-reasons-to-stay-with.html" scrolling="no" frameborder="0" style="border:none; width:450px; height:80px"></iframe></div><ol> <li><font size="4"> <p>I miss, miss, miss the desktop.  Tiles might work<a href="http://lh4.ggpht.com/-v0dCDeUU4qk/UJO1VJUgLLI/AAAAAAAAAfI/0fNOB4YyadQ/s1600-h/image%25255B4%25255D.png"><img title="image" style="border-top: 0px; border-right: 0px; background-image: none; border-bottom: 0px; float: right; padding-top: 0px; padding-left: 0px; border-left: 0px; display: inline; padding-right: 0px" border="0" alt="image" align="right" src="http://lh3.ggpht.com/-le48ipX5lc0/UJO1Vk41VYI/AAAAAAAAAfQ/iCarRN7rQ9c/image_thumb%25255B2%25255D.png?imgmax=800" width="158" height="100" /></a> fine for tablets and touch screens, but they create frustration for mouse and keyboard users. </p> </font></li> <li><font size="4"> <p>I miss, miss, miss the start menu.  From its most functional search, to quick access to docs, pics, and control panel.  I missed it so much I installed<a href="http://lh4.ggpht.com/-1rHnrb1lnmY/UJO0Z57pMlI/AAAAAAAAAe4/Ycyg0VRg-FQ/s1600-h/image%25255B2%25255D.png"><img title="image" style="border-left-width: 0px; border-right-width: 0px; background-image: none; border-bottom-width: 0px; float: right; padding-top: 0px; padding-left: 0px; display: inline; padding-right: 0px; border-top-width: 0px" border="0" alt="image" align="right" src="http://lh4.ggpht.com/-OxVZX9YWBLU/UJO0as8eSVI/AAAAAAAAAfA/cCAJHuMCUy0/image_thumb.png?imgmax=800" width="244" height="154" /></a> an program which gave me the desktop and start menu back: <a href="http://classicshell.sourceforge.net/" target="_blank">Classic Shell</a>.  I may try others sometime and see which is the best.</p> </font></li> <li><font size="4"> <p>Games are gone.  I checked my games folder and nothing’s there.  When I am extremely tired, I like to play mindless games.  I found games through the tiles but had to login with my Microsoft user ID before I could install something as simple as solitaire.  My old previously downloaded games from other sources work fine, but they are not in the games folder, either.  </p> </font></li> <li><font size="4"> <p><font size="4">Gadgets are gone.  Yes, I know they had to go because they were prey for hackers.  But I kept them because I like to live on the edge.  No, I kept them because they were useful.  I like a quick glance at an analog clock.  Yes, I could spend twenty dollars and buy a clock and put it on the wall. . . maybe I will do that.  Meanwhile I downloaded Google Desktop and am using the clock and system monitor.  Now all I need is a weather gadget.</font></p> </font></li> <li> <p><font size="4">Booting is very slow.  Minutes.  Over 5 minutes when I installed some updates yesterday.  2+ minutes normally.  It’s a good thing I don’t often reboot.  Note:  after using it a week, booting is now fast.</font></p> </li> <li><font size="4"><font size="4"><font size="4"><font size="4"><font size="4"><font size="4"><font size="4"><font size="4"> <p><font size="4">Windows didn’t offer to show me which updates were installed.  Yes, I can find it.  But a quick click after booting in Windows 7 showed me any potentially problematic updates right away.</font></p> </font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></li> <li><font size="4"><font size="4"><font size="4"><font size="4"><font size="4"><font size="4"><font size="4"><font size="4"><font size="4"><font size="4"><font size="4"><font size="4"><font size="4"><font size="4"><font size="4"><font size="4"> <p><font size="4">When I click Devices on the Right Side Menu</font><font size="4">, it doesn’t show devices and printers as it did in Windows 7.  It seems to only deal with projectors.  Completely useless.</font></p> </font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></font></li> <li> <p><font size="4">Sounds.  I liked the default sounds in Windows 7.  Windows 8 sounds are so gentle that I may miss email and appointments.  I can modify the sound scheme, but none of the other themes has a sound for appointment notifications.</font></p> </li> <li> <p><font size="4">Sorry, I’ve run out of reasons.  Can you supply two more?</font></p> </li> </ol> Unknownnoreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-66242418432011892982012-10-29T07:12:00.001-04:002012-10-29T07:12:18.456-04:00Windows 8: 10 Reasons to Switch<div class="wlWriterHeaderFooter" style="float:none; margin:0px; padding:4px 0px 4px 0px;"><iframe src="http://www.facebook.com/widgets/like.php?href=http://dhrknss.blogspot.com/2012/10/windows-8-10-reasons-to-switch.html" scrolling="no" frameborder="0" style="border:none; width:450px; height:80px"></iframe></div><p><font size="3">First, the good:</font></p> <ol> <li><font size="3">My computer is more responsive</font></li> <li><font size="3">Programs open quickly and close quickly</font></li> <li><font size="3">The disk packaging is well-designed.  </font></li> <li><font size="3">The product key is business card size</font></li> <li><font size="3">The product key is printed black on white</font></li> <li><font size="3">The disks are clearly labeled as 32 bit or 64 bit</font></li> <li><font size="3">My programs all seem to work</font></li> <li><font size="3">My programs work better than they did under Windows 7</font></li> <li><font size="3">Add-ins to programs work except for QuickBooks Contact Sync</font></li> <li><font size="3">My hardware was all discovered and installed except for an HP printer.  It took me 3 tries to install it.</font></li> </ol> Unknownnoreply@blogger.com2tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-58515045193472462452012-10-27T17:20:00.001-04:002012-10-28T20:11:35.360-04:00Windows 8 Minor Niggles and Solutions<div class="wlWriterHeaderFooter" style="float:none; margin:0px; padding:4px 0px 4px 0px;"><iframe src="http://www.facebook.com/widgets/like.php?href=http://dhrknss.blogspot.com/2012/10/windows-8-minor-niggles-and-solutions.html" scrolling="no" frameborder="0" style="border:none; width:450px; height:80px"></iframe></div><p><font size="4">I installed Windows 8 upgrade today.  Went like clockwork, a very slow and uncommunicative clock, that is.  There were many times when it said “please wait” with no indication of how long.  When it finally did install, I tried to like the metro interface, but failed.  I wanted my Windows Start Button back with easy access to the control panel. I wanted my desktop back.  I was able to finally see my desktop but Windows I would not automatically go there at startup.  I found the solution for the missing Start Button and my desktop:  </font><a href="http://www.forumswindows8.com/startmenu8/send-your-feedback-startmenu8-beta-7847.htm" target="_blank"><font size="4">Start Menu 8</font></a><font size="4">.  Start Menu 8 lets you bypass the metro interface and go directly to your desktop.  And it gives you a start menu with quick links for frequently used programs and the usual Documents, Pictures, Music, etc.  So if you now have windows 8 and you miss the Start Menu and desktop download </font><a href="http://www.forumswindows8.com/startmenu8/send-your-feedback-startmenu8-beta-7847.htm" target="_blank"><font size="4">Start Menu 8</font></a><font size="4">.  </font></p> <p><font size="4">AN UPDATE:  While it worked well, it also disabled my left arrow button.  Now I am trying <a href="http://classicshell.sourceforge.net/" target="_blank">Classic Shell</a>.  It is working very well.  I’ll let you know if there are any more updates.</font></p> Unknownnoreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-10426559382776579802012-10-09T20:22:00.001-04:002012-10-09T20:22:59.370-04:00Blue Screen Of Death<div class="wlWriterHeaderFooter" style="float:none; margin:0px; padding:4px 0px 4px 0px;"><iframe src="http://www.facebook.com/widgets/like.php?href=http://dhrknss.blogspot.com/2012/10/blue-screen-of-death.html" scrolling="no" frameborder="0" style="border:none; width:450px; height:80px"></iframe></div><p><strong>Check your temperature:</strong> Computers can suddenly shut down for many reasons, but the most common is over heating. Even in winter a computer may overheat if it's fans are not working well or it's air intakes are blocked.  If you hear an unusual noise, sometimes pulsing from your computer, it may be the sound of fan bearings going bad.  Those fans should be replaced immediately.  A computer can also overheat when its air intakes are clogged by dust, lint, pet hair, or other soft substances.  Find those vents and wipe them with a Swiffer cloth or damp towel when the computer is turned off.  Using a vac may make a fan rotate in reverse and damage it.  So stick to cloths and give your computer a wipe down from time to time.</p> Unknownnoreply@blogger.com6tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-50198283868226315962012-10-09T20:21:00.001-04:002012-10-09T20:21:43.333-04:00Ipads and Printers<div class="wlWriterHeaderFooter" style="float:none; margin:0px; padding:4px 0px 4px 0px;"><iframe src="http://www.facebook.com/widgets/like.php?href=http://dhrknss.blogspot.com/2012/10/ipads-and-printers.html" scrolling="no" frameborder="0" style="border:none; width:450px; height:80px"></iframe></div><table border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody> <tr> <td valign="top"> <p><img style="display: inline; float: right" border="0" align="right" src="http://gallery.mailchimp.com/63b88bf075aef54147979a13c/images/200px_Gnome_dev_printer.svg.png" width="200" height="200" /></p> <p><strong>Can you print from your ipad?</strong> Apple has never been as accepting of printer brands and models as Windows.  If you want to print from your Ipad, there are really only two options:</p> <ol> <li>Obtain an AirPrint compatible printer.  You probably already have a printer at home but it is not compatible with Apple's AirPrint.  Only some printers from some manufacturers are compatible.  I won't list them all but HP makes it easy to find one.  Simply click on <a href="http://www.hp.com/global/us/en/eprint/airprint.html?jumpid=re_r11400_airprint_redirect">HP</a> to find one that will work with your IPad.</li> <li>Email whatever you want to print to your "other" computer, the Windows PC. </li> </ol> <p>This is exactly why I don't like apple.  I have both an older Brother printer and an older HP printer.  They work with my Windows PC and my Android Tablet.  Boo, Apple AirPrint!</p> </td> </tr> </tbody></table> Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-20282511510845978612012-10-09T20:18:00.001-04:002012-10-09T20:20:01.923-04:00Windows 8<div class="wlWriterHeaderFooter" style="float:none; margin:0px; padding:4px 0px 4px 0px;"><iframe src="http://www.facebook.com/widgets/like.php?href=http://dhrknss.blogspot.com/2012/10/windows-8.html" scrolling="no" frameborder="0" style="border:none; width:450px; height:80px"></iframe></div><h3> </h3> <h4>How much will it cost?</h4> <p><font face="Times New Roman"><font size="4"><strong>Getting started with Windows 8. </strong></font></font></p> <p><font size="3">Microsoft's next operating system will be released by the end of this month.  How much will it cost?  If you purchase a new computer, it will come preloaded as it has in the past.  If you purchased a new computer running Windows 7 after June 2, then you have the opportunity to get a cheap upgrade.  How cheap?  $14.99.  But you must follow the instructions on </font><a href="https://windowsupgradeoffer.com/en-US"><font size="3">this website</font></a><font size="3">:  If you are like the rest of us, running an older computer with Windows 7, Vista, or XP, you are in luck.  For the low price of $39.99 Microsoft is extending the offer of a Windows 8 Pro upgrade but only if you follow the instructions on </font><a href="http://windowsteamblog.com/windows/b/bloggingwindows/archive/2012/07/02/upgrade-to-windows-8-pro-for-39-99.aspx"><font size="3">this website</font></a><font size="3">.and only if you complete the transaction by January 31, so don't delay.</font></p> Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-62555232455412634062012-10-04T11:06:00.001-04:002012-10-05T18:00:45.644-04:00Should Government Help Grow Business or Get Out of the Way?<div class="wlWriterHeaderFooter" style="float:none; margin:0px; padding:4px 0px 4px 0px;"><iframe src="http://www.facebook.com/widgets/like.php?href=http://dhrknss.blogspot.com/2012/10/should-government-help-grow-business-or.html" scrolling="no" frameborder="0" style="border:none; width:450px; height:80px"></iframe></div><p> </p> <p><font size="4">That seemed to be the substance of the Presidential Debate.  And that is a good question which I will try to answer in a round-about way.</font></p> <p><font size="4">I have been in several churches in my life.  They have <a href="http://lh4.ggpht.com/-1p-ggiV55iI/UG2l7w1flHI/AAAAAAAAAV8/II0Ic1jtKEA/s1600-h/256Wall_House2%25255B2%25255D.jpg"><img style="background-image: none; border-right-width: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; display: inline; float: right; border-top-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; padding-top: 0px" title="256Wall_House2" border="0" alt="256Wall_House2" align="right" src="http://lh5.ggpht.com/-P2JA2K0Womw/UG2l8USmL0I/AAAAAAAAAWE/OdeWZKoic5c/256Wall_House2_thumb.jpg?imgmax=800" width="244" height="163" /></a>ranged in governing philosophy from putting walls around activities that lead to harm to a strategy of giving us information and allowing us to make the decision. In other words from Puritan to . . . well whatever is the opposite.</font></p> <p><font size="4">The church I am in right now falls in the latter category.  The leaders and pastors are there to enable the congregation in doing the work of ministry.  How it works out is not setting out a list of rules or avoidances, but learning to listen to God as he speaks through scripture, through others, and through His Spirit.  </font></p> <p><font size="4">This is both an easier and more difficult way to live.  If I am given rules, I don’t have to think, don’t have to worry, don’t have to wrestle.  I need only obey.  Without rules, I have to think and wrestle with decisions which is better for me.</font></p> <p><font size="4">So how does that relate to government?  Like the church I am in, it works better if it enables the citizens to function freely .  .  . by getting out of the way.  Government does some things well: provides defense and security, maintains communication and roads, and carries on relationships with other governments.  But running a business is something that a government cannot do well.  Government functions best when it is inefficient.  Businesses must be efficient.  Inefficiency is good for government and bad for business.  Our founders knew that when they created an inefficient Tri-cameral body:  Executive, Legislative, and Judicial.  When government moves slowly, it moves best.</font></p> <p><font size="4">Business is different.  Business must have a leader, a decision-maker who can make business decisions on the fly.  Businesses have to take risks.  Business cannot function like a government or it will fail.  Government cannot run a profitable business—it can’t seem to run itself without incurring massive debt.  And an unprofitable debt-ridden business is no business at all.  </font></p> <p><font size="4">Government can help grow business best when it stays out of the way and lets business people run businesses.  </font></p> <p> </p> <p><font size="4"></font></p> <p>Wall image By Wenkbrauwalbatros (Own work) [CC-BY-SA-3.0 (<a href="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0)">http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0)</a> or GFDL (<a href="http://www.gnu.org/copyleft/fdl.html)]">http://www.gnu.org/copyleft/fdl.html)]</a>, via Wikimedia Commons</p> Unknownnoreply@blogger.com6tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-14797274979539349932012-04-26T06:50:00.001-04:002012-04-26T06:50:57.233-04:00When Spam Looks Really Real<div class="wlWriterHeaderFooter" style="float:none; margin:0px; padding:4px 0px 4px 0px;"><iframe src="http://www.facebook.com/widgets/like.php?href=http://dhrknss.blogspot.com/2012/04/when-spam-looks-really-real.html" scrolling="no" frameborder="0" style="border:none; width:450px; height:80px"></iframe></div><p><font size="4"></font></p> <p><font size="4">I received an email today.  It appeared real.  Anyone might have thought it real.  Here is how it read.</font></p> <p> <table border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody> <tr> <td> <p><strong>ADOBE PDF READER 2012 UPGRADE NOTIFICATION</strong></p> <p>This is to remind that a new version of Adobe Acrobat Reader 2012 with enhanced features for viewing, creating, editing, printing and internet-sharing PDF documents has been released. <br />To upgrade your application: </p> <p>+ Go to http://www.2012-acrobat-software-upgrade.com <br />+ Get your options, download and upgrade. </p> <p>Copyright 2012 Adobe Systems Incorporated. All rights reserved. <br />Adobe Systems Incorporated <br />343 Preston Street <br />Ottawa, ON K1S 1N4 <br />Canada </p> </td> </tr> </tbody></table> </p> <p><font size="4">THIS IS A HOAX.  For starters, Adobe Reader is at version X (10), specifically 10.1.3.  It has never been referred to by year.  Next, Adobe does not send email notifications of upgrades, not even to me, a registered user.  Upgrade notices are generated by the program when you use it or by a memory-resident icon on the taskbar, never by email.</font></p> <p><font size="4">What will happen if you download the program from the spam email site?  I can’t tell you.  I had no interest in being the guinea pig.  What I can tell you is that anyone who so clearly violates trade name rules, is up to no good.  </font></p> <p><font size="4">This has been your spam warning for the day!</font></p> Unknownnoreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-25765867218428053642012-02-13T20:31:00.001-05:002012-02-13T20:31:50.669-05:00Support the Buckeye Trail<div class="wlWriterHeaderFooter" style="float:none; margin:0px; padding:4px 0px 4px 0px;"><iframe src="http://www.facebook.com/widgets/like.php?href=http://dhrknss.blogspot.com/2012/02/support-buckeye-trail.html" scrolling="no" frameborder="0" style="border:none; width:450px; height:80px"></iframe></div><p> </p> <p>I received the letter below and want to encourage you to support the Buckeye Trail.  I am offering a 2-night at my cabin for the silent auction.  </p> <p> </p> <p> </p> <p>Monday, February 13, 2012</p> <p>Dear Diana,</p> <p>Hello, my name is Yvonne and I am an avid hiker and backpacker. From the Foothills Trail of North Carolina…the Sheltowee Trace of Kentucky…the Appalachian Trail reaching from Georgia to Maine and the great state of Ohio’s own Buckeye Trail, I have backpacked hundreds of miles on these footpaths. From the strenuous climbs of a rugged mountain, to the views of a peaceful valley spreading below, I am passionate about them all and because of that love I want to help build, maintain and promote the trails and to protect the lands on which they traverse.</p> <p>I want to focus on just one of these beautiful trails today…Ohio’s Buckeye Trail. The Buckeye Trail is a 1,444 mile hiking trail located entirely within the state of Ohio. It traverses 49 of Ohio’s 88 counties. From the southern terminus at Eden Park overlooking the Ohio River…this trail follows old canal towpaths, abandoned railroad rights of way, rivers, lakeshores, rural byways and primitive footpaths over forested public and private lands. It passes through state forests, state and local parks and many small towns and urban areas where traveling on foot gives you a unique perspective of our state. It is truly a gem in our very own back yards…that needs to be preserved, protected and maintained for now and for future generations.</p> <p>As a volunteer of the Buckeye Trail Association (BTA), a 501(c) 3, nonprofit organization formed in 1959, I am coordinating the Silent Auction to be held at the 1<sup>st</sup> Annual Buckeye TrailFest. On April 26<sup>th</sup>-29<sup>th</sup>, 2012, the Buckeye TrailFest will feature Presentations, Workshops, Field Trips, Hikes, and this fundraiser. This letter is a personal invitation for you to get involved and to possibly donate towards this Silent Auction. All proceeds from the auction will benefit the BTA and may be tax deductible.</p> <p>Thank you, for reading this letter, for researching our websites and for considering making a donation to the Buckeye TrailFest. This Silent Auction will be a grand fundraiser and a romantic weekend package for two or any offer, will be greatly appreciated by myself, Andy Niekamp and the many hikers and backpackers of Ohio…Check out their websites at <a href="http://www.buckeyetrailfest.org/">http://www.buckeyetrailfest.org/</a> and <a href="http://www.buckeyetrail.org/">http://www.buckeyetrail.org/</a></p> <p>Loving Life,</p> <p>Yvonne Entingh</p> <p>Buckeye TrailFest Silent Auction Coordinator</p> Unknownnoreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-25817171921111096022012-02-13T18:54:00.001-05:002012-02-13T18:54:19.915-05:00Ereaders and Tablets<div class="wlWriterHeaderFooter" style="float:none; margin:0px; padding:4px 0px 4px 0px;"><iframe src="http://www.facebook.com/widgets/like.php?href=http://dhrknss.blogspot.com/2012/02/ereaders-and-tablets.html" scrolling="no" frameborder="0" style="border:none; width:450px; height:80px"></iframe></div><p>As many of you know, I use the <a href="http://www.amazon.com/?_encoding=UTF8&tag=dianaharkness-20&linkCode=ur2&camp=1789&creative=390957" target="_blank">Kindle</a> DX for much of my reading.  Most of my Kindle books are downloaded from Amazon, a few are from the library.  Note:  library books have a 2-week due date, but that is irrelevant if you do not use the 3G on your Kindle.  If you don’t connect and sync with Amazon, the books stay on your Kindle and are readable until you delete them.</p> <p>I also have a tablet.  I was “forced” to read a book on the tablet because the particular site from which I obtained that book, required use of an Android app to read it.  I dislike reading on my tablet almost as much as I dislike reading on my computer.  The screen brightness tires my eyes.  The tablet, however, makes reading easier, but enabling me to read in a number of different places and positions.  But the eyestrain will keep me from using it as a reader.</p> <p>Another problem, common to tablets and the <a href="http://www.amazon.com/?_encoding=UTF8&tag=dianaharkness-20&linkCode=ur2&camp=1789&creative=390957">Kindle</a> Touch, is the problem of unexpected touching interfering with the reading experience.  If you live in a house with cats, you will understand the problem.  It is not uncommon for a cat to walk across my Kindle while I am reading.  If it was a Kindle Touch, the cat paws would create unknown havoc.  Also, my own misplaced touch would frustrate the reading experience.</p> <p>My conclusion:  Non-touch Ereaders with their e-ink technology provide the best experience, with fewer headaches and eyestrain. There is merit to having one device solely for reading.</p> Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-52327059876342263862011-12-05T09:29:00.001-05:002011-12-05T14:17:02.860-05:00Christmas Dinner<div class="wlWriterHeaderFooter" style="float:none; margin:0px; padding:4px 0px 4px 0px;"><iframe src="http://www.facebook.com/widgets/like.php?href=http://dhrknss.blogspot.com/2011/12/christmas-dinner.html" scrolling="no" frameborder="0" style="border:none; width:450px; height:80px"></iframe></div><p><font size="3">Every year in the past I have roasted turkey for Christmas, serving a “traditional” Christmas dinner to our international guests.  Perhaps traditional American or traditional European would be more accurate.  Most of my guests have been from India or East Asia and turkey and the fixings are not at all traditional there.  </font></p> <p><font size="3">This year, I decided to forget tradition and go for celebration.   (I cannot cook a Christmas dinner without European foods, I simply won’t cook the traditional ones.) That’s right, for celebration, I’ll concentrate on color and taste,  Red and green and other celebratory colors, and spices and chocolate.  </font></p> <p><font size="3">Instead of turkey, we’ll have turkey/spinach/carrot/mushroom lasagna with an Alfredo sauce.  I will cook the boneless turkey breast in my slow cooker with onion and sage and shred it for the lasagna.  </font></p> <p><font size="3">And how about an Asian inspired vegetarian dish?  Fried red curry tofu will provide protein and color.  </font></p> <p><font size="3">These main dishes will be accompanied by bright green peas, roasted red carrots on a bed of yellow squash, and other vegetables, either roasted or otherwise prepared to make the best use of their color.  </font></p> <p><font size="3">To finish, everyone likes chocolate, so Molten Chocolate cakes are in order, along with a more healthful (and French) Apple Tart-Tatin.</font></p> <p><font size="3"></font></p> <p><font size="3">What will you have for Christmas?  Would you like to make some of the dishes I am making?  I’m happy to share my recipes.</font><font size="3"></font></p> Unknownnoreply@blogger.com6tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-3842754523417999922011-11-22T09:54:00.001-05:002011-11-22T09:54:11.779-05:00Thanksgiving<p>(This was sent to my clients in 2004.  Some things bear repeating.)</p> <p><b></b></p> <p><b>In 1863, during the Civil War, Abraham Lincoln announced a day of Thanksgiving with these words:</b></p> <p><b>Needful diversions of wealth and of strength from the fields of peaceful industry to the national defense, have not arrested the plough, the shuttle or the ship; the axe has enlarged the borders of our settlements, and the mines, as well of iron and coal as of the precious metals, have yielded even more abundantly than heretofore. Population has steadily increased, notwithstanding the waste that has been made in the camp, the siege and the battle-field; and the country, rejoicing in the consciousness of augmented strength and vigor, is permitted to expect continuance of years with large increase of freedom. No human counsel hath devised nor hath any mortal hand worked out these great things. They are the gracious gifts of the Most High God, who, while dealing with us in anger for our sins, hath nevertheless remembered mercy. It has seemed to me fit and proper that they should be solemnly, reverently and gratefully acknowledged as with one heart and one voice by the whole American People. </b></p> <p><b>So, today, I thank God for our country and our blessings, but also want to thank you for paying me to do what I find so enjoyable, for always be gracious in the midst of computer problems, for allowing me to take as long as I need to fix what needs to be fixed, for putting up with me on those days when the words don't come out clearly, for all that you do that makes my job so much fun:  Thank YOU!!!</b></p> <p><b>And when your computer causes you problems, before I get there, consider this:  Reverend Billy Graham writes of theologian Matthew Henry who at an old age was mugged on the street corner. That night, Henry wrote in his diary, “Let me be thankful first because I was never robbed before; second, although they took my purse, they did not take my life; third, because although they took my all, it was not much; and fourth, because it was I who was robbed, not I who robbed.” (</b>Billy Graham, Unto the Hills (Nashville: Thomas Nelson, 1996), 411.) <b>In the same spirit, when things go wrong with your computer or the way you use it, be thankful that you have a computer, thankful that this thing does not happen frequently, thankful that a computer is really such a small part of life <em>(it really</em> <em>is!),</em> and thankful that you are not the one who has to fix the problem!  </b></p> Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-20972989976719026152011-10-26T07:28:00.001-04:002011-10-26T07:28:11.452-04:00Getting Started<div class="wlWriterHeaderFooter" style="float:none; margin:0px; padding:4px 0px 4px 0px;"><iframe src="http://www.facebook.com/widgets/like.php?href=http://dhrknss.blogspot.com/2011/10/getting-started.html" scrolling="no" frameborder="0" style="border:none; width:450px; height:80px"></iframe></div><p><font size="3">Someone asked me how to start writing.  Here are some tips:</font></p> <ul> <li><font size="3">Make the time.  Every day, if you can.  If you can’t manage some spare time every day, take time whenever you can.</font> </li> <li><font size="3">Use your preferred writing medium:  computer or paper and start writing whatever is in your mind or heart.  </font></li> <li><font size="3">Write anything.  Write everything.  Don’t stop until you’re ready.  </font></li> <li><font size="3">Don’t worry about grammar or punctuation; you can take care of that later when you edit.</font> </li> <li><font size="3">When an idea strikes, wherever you are, jot it down so you can use it later.</font> </li> <li><font size="3">A good book to get you started might be </font><a href="http://rcm.amazon.com/e/cm?lt1=_blank&bc1=000000&IS2=1&bg1=FFFFFF&fc1=000000&lc1=0000FF&t=dianaharkness-20&o=1&p=8&l=as4&m=amazon&f=ifr&ref=ss_til&asins=0385480016"><font size="3"><em>Bird by Bird</em> by Anne Lamott.</font></a><font size="3">  Easy to read with some good suggestions.</font> </li> </ul> <p><font size="3">Remember, it’s not how well you start; it’s how well you finish.  So start in whatever way works for you and then work at it until you finish.  I tend to write fairly complete first drafts, but my novel may be in it’s 20th rewrite!  </font></p> Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-3383543984196003782011-10-21T09:42:00.001-04:002011-10-21T09:42:32.313-04:00Multi-Media Publishing<p><a href="http://lh5.ggpht.com/-zM39xkNqmNI/TqF2xNSn32I/AAAAAAAAAGo/pLTwFcBT0ws/s1600-h/Desk-at-Rustproof-Records1.png"><img style="background-image: none; border-right-width: 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; display: inline; border-top-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; padding-top: 0px" title="Desk at Rustproof Records" border="0" alt="Desk at Rustproof Records" src="http://lh5.ggpht.com/-e8hN8nw963Y/TqF2x43Q10I/AAAAAAAAAGw/NtGbxm2NKQw/Desk-at-Rustproof-Records_thumb1.png?imgmax=800" width="404" height="192" /></a></p> <p>When I was in college, the notebook or the typewriter was the medium used to write term papers.  Multi-media meant combining one or more medium with another.  That meant, for example, gluing or taping pictures to the written document or combining the projection of still photographic images with music.  During and post-college I produced multi-media “slide shows” which were individual projected images accompanied by a sound track.  </p> <p>Very soon after this, the personal computer became available, and soon after that the internet.</p> <p>Today, multi-media means much more than it did during my college days.  When I or another blogger or any online source publishes text, we can combine those words with music, video, pictures, etc.  I like simple presentations, so in many ways I despise today’s multi-media.  When I  am reading, I don’t want to be distracted by other media.  Websites that automatically play music don’t stay long in my browser.  When I click on a newspaper article, I don’t want to see moving animation unless it is directly connected to the article.  Much of today’s multi-media takes the form of advertising which I particularly wish to avoid.</p> <p>I recently read an article from the New Yorker.  I found it interesting, but lengthy, so I printed it to read later.  Although the piece was interesting, it referred to embedded video which I could not view in the printout.  I printed a newspaper article about spiders for my files. It had two illustrations.  However they were presented as an animated slide show, so only one of the illustrations appeared in the print out; not the one I particularly wanted.  In each case, I was left wanting.</p> <p>What does this mean?  Have we become a paperless society?  Future news and information <em>will</em> be read on devices like the <a href="http://www.amazon.com/?_encoding=UTF8&tag=dianaharkness-20&linkCode=ur2&camp=1789&creative=390957" target="_blank">Kindle</a> or the <a href=""http://rcm.amazon.com/e/cm?lt1=_blank&bc1=000000&IS2=1&bg1=FFFFFF&fc1=000000&lc1=0000FF&t=dianaharkness-20&o=1&p=8&l=as4&m=amazon&f=ifr&ref=ss_til&asins=B0051VVOB2" target="_blank">Fire</a> or any tablet or phone or computer that pulls video, still images, and music from the web to your device.  Is this better or worse or indifferent.</p> <p>Let’s start with better.  Never a cognitive morning reader, I found <a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6-39qjUuSJU&feature=related" target="_blank">a better way</a> to read the poem: have a professional read it to me.  I always have trouble with some punctuation marks: semi-colons and long dashes.  I was able to find a site that not only made it clear, but read sentences so I could hear the difference.  Graphics, video, and audio files all add to our understanding.</p> <p>Now for the worse.  I’m tired of being bombarded with pictures and music that add nothing to the text or detract from it.  Some of these are ads; some are simply irrelevant to the text.  You have all heard the webpage that has “stupid” music playing in the background, or the page with pictures that have nothing to do with the article or blog you are reading.  That is one reason why my blog posts contain few pictures.</p> <p>As for the indifferent, this is more a perspective of the reader/listener than the web designer.  After awhile we learn to tune out all but the most obnoxious tunes, pictures, and videos.  Or if one site annoys, we’ll find what we want on another.</p> <p>So, embrace the multi-media that improves your experience and when you do think about what life would be like without it and give thanks for these small, but significant advances in technology.</p> Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-23545898382247743912011-10-21T08:58:00.001-04:002011-10-21T08:58:33.912-04:00Electronic Note Taking<p> </p> <p>When you visit any website, Amazon, a blog, a journal, any website, you might want to take notes on what you find there.  I take notes on information relating to my novels and short stories, my business, recipes, and other matters.  In the past I have recommended <a href="http://office.microsoft.com/en-us/onenote/" target="_blank">Microsoft One Note</a> and have used it extensively.  The time has come to make a new recommendation.</p> <p>First, let me explain why I have moved away from Microsoft One Note. Microsoft has put One Note in the place where Apple computers once lived:  in the land of non-compatibility.  In the past, if you wanted to play a certain game or use a certain app on a Mac, you couldn’t.   But Apple has gained wisdom while Microsoft’s petty attitude of superiority is costing it a loyal customer.  Simply consider one Apple app:  ITunes.  You can use it on a Mac or on a PC or on your smartphone.  Now consider the equivalent Microsoft app:  Windows Media Player.  You can use it on a PC or on your smartphone, but only if it is a Windows smartphone.  Get the picture?</p> <p>The same thing holds true for One Note.  You can use it on a PC or on a Windows smartphone or an IPhone, but not on an Android phone, and certainly not Blackberry or Palm.  What if you want to use a PC, an Android phone, and an Ipad?  Say goodbye to One Note and hello to <a href="http://www.evernote.com/about/download/" target="_blank">Evernote</a>.  <a href="http://www.evernote.com/about/download/" target="_blank">Evernote</a> works on almost every smartphone, tablet, and with Mac, PC, Android, Blackberry, and Palm.  </p> <p>What are the functional differences between One Note and Evernote?  I set up Evernote on my Windows 7 PC and imported my notes from One Note.  All my notes from all my folders imported into a single notebook in Evernote.  However they were tagged with the name of their folder (Recipes, Cabin, Journal, etc.) so it was a simple matter to set up Evernote notebooks with those names and move the notes to the appropriate notebook.  </p> <p>I used One Note mainly for saving web clippings.  I copied an article of interest to me and pasted it into Evernote.  It worked as seamlessly as One Note and looked better.  Like Amazon’s <a href="http://www.amazon.com/?_encoding=UTF8&tag=dianaharkness-20&linkCode=ur2&camp=1789&creative=390957" target="_blank">Kindle</a>, Evernote give you an email address to let you send notes directly to Evernote.  I haven’t tried it, but it sounds like a good idea.  I can then forward an interesting email to that email address and have it saved in Evernote.  Cool.  Evernote stores your notes online, so you can access them from any computer.  Finally, Evernote is free for a basic account, which is all I and most people need.  If you want the <a href="http://www.evernote.com/about/premium/" target="_blank">Premium Account</a> it only costs $5 month or $45/year.  </p> <p>What else can you do with Evernote?  You can share your note by emailing it or posting it on <a href="http://twitter.com/#!/dhrknss" target="_blank">Twitter</a> or <a href="http://www.facebook.com/diana.harkness" target="_blank">Facebook</a>.  I emailed one to myself to test it and I received the body of the note in the body of the email.  I haven’t yet tried posting to Twitter or Facebook, but I expect it will work as seamlessly.</p> <p>Is there any reason to continue using One Note?  I haven’t found one.  If you have, please let me know.</p> Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-55069766683190881412011-10-17T07:41:00.001-04:002011-10-17T07:41:56.100-04:00A Whisper of Peace: A Review<p>A Whisper of Peace is a novel which takes place predominately in the 19th century Alaskan wilderness.  Of all the new novels by Christian authors I have read this year, this one was the most well-crafted and well-written. </p> <p>A Whisper of Peace is the story of three people who are searching for peace in their lives.  Clay, the son of a pastor ministering to Paiutes, has left his home in the Oklahoma Territory.  Armed with high expectations of following in his father’s footsteps, he tries, with little success, to start a successful church among the Athabascan natives of Alaska.  His half-sister, Vivian, joins him to get a fresh start from the secret which haunts her past.  The first Athabascan Clay and Vivian  meet is Lizzie.  Deserted by her Caucasian father and an outcast from her tribe, she seeks peace through reconciliation with her grandparents and finding her father in San Francisco. Clay and Vivian try to heal a generational rift between Lizzie, and her grandparents, an action which puts Clay and Vivian at odds with the very people they want to help and creates a dilemma between helping the one and helping the many.  </p> <p>These three characters find their lives taking turns that they had not expected.  Vivian finds that her secret is not as she had believed.  She changes her life to reflect her new perspective.  Lizzie discovers her life objective changed; She changes, too.  Clay realizes that church is not what he thinks it is--a brief note from his father and he immediately feels better.  Predictably Clay and Lizzie fall in love.  You will have to read the book for yourself to find out what happens.</p> <p>I enjoyed the author’s depictions of wilderness life:  canoeing, hunting, snaring, and fishing, and her description of tribal culture. (You can learn more about the Athabascan people <a href="http://www.alaskanative.net/en/main_nav/education/culture_alaska/athabascan/" target="_blank">here</a>.) I also enjoyed the two child characters that were links between Lizzie and the missionaries and her Athabascan people.  I found most characters’ physical descriptions believable.  </p> <p>I have only two complaints about the book.  First, I couldn’t generate any particular like or dislike for any of the characters.  Clay and Lizzie both have clear-cut goals and a strong determination to achieve their goals.  Vivian doesn’t know what she wants.  I wanted to find some point of identification with the characters, but their problems seemed so easily handled.  Indeed, some major problems arise, then without further comment, they disappear.  One example is a head injury which debilitates Clay until all at once it is no longer an issue.  The heavy internal issues that the characters wrestle with don’t seem to consume them as they would a real person.  At the end, the novel skips ahead two years and shows all the characters perfectly happy.  </p> <p>My other complaint, and it may be related to the first one, is that the book seems old.  Not old in the sense of a timeless classic, but old in the sense that it tries to communicate to someone living in another time period, I’m just not sure where.  I recently reviewed a novel that contained a “chaste kiss;”  For a love story, this novel has no kiss at all and little passion.</p> <p>Sure, Clay shows great passion for what he wants to do for God, but little passion for anyone or anything else.  Indeed, his passion for Lizzie, the woman he loves, comes only in fits and spurts and he shows very little care for his step-sister Vivian. I want an author to make me feel what the characters feel and these characters feel very little.  </p> <p>That being said, this is the most well-written new Christian novel I have read this year.  There were no glaring spelling or grammar errors.  If you want to read a book purely for entertainment and to get a small glimpse of 19th century frontier life, pick this up.  But if you want to enter the world of people who lead deep lives that resonate into the 21st century, find another novel.  </p> <p> </p> <p>I received this book free from the publisher. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255.</p> Unknownnoreply@blogger.com2tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-37800013923349964632011-10-11T07:46:00.001-04:002011-10-11T07:46:00.508-04:00Ebooks and Their Readers<p>At a past writer’s conference, one of the presenters gave a talk on the ontology of books.  His main point seemed to be that the ebook was a failure. It was a failure because it did not give the emotional satisfaction of a book.  It was a failure because an ebook cost as much or more to produce than a book.  He spoke about the printing industry and the emotional bond he had with his father through his father’s library.</p> <p>At the time, I partially agreed.  I had no knowledge of the printing industry and how it compared to ebook production and his statements seemed reasonable.  My personal experience with my <a href="http://www.amazon.com/?_encoding=UTF8&tag=dianaharkness-20&linkCode=ur2&camp=1789&creative=390957" target="_blank">Kindle</a> was a love/hate experience, but the love slightly outweighed the hate.  Sure the <a href="http://www.amazon.com/?_encoding=UTF8&tag=dianaharkness-20&linkCode=ur2&camp=1789&creative=390957" target="_blank">Kindle</a> was expensive, needed to be charged, could be broken, and did not have the tactile feel of a book.  But I did find it convenient to carry.  I am usually reading several books at a time and don’t’ always know which one I will feel like reading in a particular situation.  It is also convenient not to have to move the book light every time I turn a page.  Yes, I read at night in bed.</p> <p>As I have used it over the years, however, I have found the benefits to outweigh the detriments.  The <a href="http://www.amazon.com/?_encoding=UTF8&tag=dianaharkness-20&linkCode=ur2&camp=1789&creative=390957" target="_blank">Kindle</a> is great for notes.  I don’t carry a notebook when I read; I lose notebooks.  Nor do I carry a highlighter or post-its.  The Kindle lets me mark passages and refer to them later.  If I have forgotten to mark a passage, I can do a search.  The search function is very useful when I review a book.  I can easily count the number of times an author has used a word or term.  And when I am ready to write my review, I can go back through my pages of notes and pick out quotes to use in the review.  My notes give me a link back to their location in the book so I can check context.</p> <p>What don’t I like?  Sure, the battery lasts a long, long time, but I dread the day when I pick it up to write a review and it says “low battery.”   If that does happen, I can go to kindle.amazon.com and find my notes, but not link to the context.  <a href="http://www.amazon.com/?_encoding=UTF8&tag=dianaharkness-20&linkCode=ur2&camp=1789&creative=390957" target="_blank">Kindle</a> for PC or Mac or Smartphone lets you sync with your computer or phone.  You can find your notes and link to the context.  For some books this does not work at all.  If you, as I do, acquire some of your books from a source other than Amazon, you may not be able to see your notes anywhere but your <a href="http://www.amazon.com/?_encoding=UTF8&tag=dianaharkness-20&linkCode=ur2&camp=1789&creative=390957" target="_blank">Kindle</a>.  (*Some of the publishers I review for have their own download link for review copies.)</p> <p>Library books are available for the <a href="http://www.amazon.com/?_encoding=UTF8&tag=dianaharkness-20&linkCode=ur2&camp=1789&creative=390957" target="_blank">Kindle</a> but they are limited.  I had been hoping that borrowing with the <a href="http://www.amazon.com/?_encoding=UTF8&tag=dianaharkness-20&linkCode=ur2&camp=1789&creative=390957" target="_blank">Kindle</a> would provide a better experience than the library.  I don’t usually borrow library books, because I have trouble returning them by the due date.  EBooks can be borrowed for two weeks only.  That short time really doesn’t bother me because there are so few books available that I would want to read. </p> <p>As a writer, I keep track of the publishing industry.  The latest figures show eBooks outselling paper books.  And why not?  An eBook is instantly accessible, never smells musty, never becomes damaged.  It’s a different method of reading but the words and thoughts are the same.  Whether you prefer paper or eBook is up to you.  I’ll push to have my novels published in both forms, but will read them on my <a href="http://www.amazon.com/?_encoding=UTF8&tag=dianaharkness-20&linkCode=ur2&camp=1789&creative=390957" target="_blank">Kindle</a>.  They were composed on a computer; why not read them on an electronic device?  Let me know what you think about eBooks and Ereaders.  Are you using them?  Do you love or hate them?</p> Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-89799040215674360202011-10-10T11:29:00.001-04:002011-10-10T11:29:40.110-04:00The Soul Reader By Gerard D. Webster: A Review<p> <table border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody> <tr> <td><img src="http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/51hzQUT0T4L._SL160_.jpg" /> </td> <td valign="top"><a href="http://www.amazon.com/Soul-Reader-Novel-Suspense/dp/1449720528%3FSubscriptionId%3D0JTCV5ZMHMF7ZYTXGFR2%26tag%3Ddianaharkness-20%26linkCode%3Dxm2%26camp%3D2025%26creative%3D165953%26creativeASIN%3D1449720528">The Soul Reader: A Novel of Suspense</a> </td> </tr> </tbody></table> The Soul Reader has a name.  No it’s not simply the name of the book but also the description of the protagonist, Ward McNulty, who has the power (but only in sufficient light) to discern a person’s spiritual state.  Like any good hero, however, he fails to recognize his own failings. . . until the middle of the book.</p> <p>This novel begins as a perilous adventure to discover the mastermind behind a series of murders.  McNulty, a journalist, has hit bottom: jobless, homeless, and crippled, when his erstwhile girlfriend, Carrie, hands him a book deal partnership where his investigative journalism skills come to the fore in their quest to expose the mastermind behind the murders of members of a large commercial fraud, including the murder of McNulty’s father.  The story unfolds with the involvement of a retired police detective, a member of the FBI, a Colombian saint, and an Italian businessman.  And let’s not forget to throw in the assassin with no identity other than “Culebra,” until the middle of the book.</p> <p>Yes, it’s the middle of the book where the loose ends start to be tied while the novel falls apart.  First, let me state that if you are a traditional Roman Catholic, this novel may enthrall you.  But for other readers, it is a mess.  Disturbing news reports of McNulty’s demise cause McNulty’s mother and wannabe girlfriend to sit together and recite the rosary.  It calms them. Then McNulty, in the midst of danger, starts to say the hours, decades, or centuries. I’m not sure which, because I have no idea what any of it means.  To top it all off, I find my first textual error: a misspelled word.</p> <p>You might think I am anti-Roman Catholic.  I’ll leave that to your perception.  I thoroughly enjoyed and <a href="http://dhrknss.blogspot.com/search?q=passion&x=6&y=7" target="_blank">recommended</a> a novel where the lead character was a Roman Catholic “sister,”  <a href="http://www.amazon.com/Passion-Mary-Margaret-Lisa-Samson/dp/B003JTHRW8%3FSubscriptionId%3D0JTCV5ZMHMF7ZYTXGFR2%26tag%3Ddianaharkness-20%26linkCode%3Dxm2%26camp%3D2025%26creative%3D165953%26creativeASIN%3DB003JTHRW8"><img src="http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/51ySWHo4-EL._SL160_.jpg" /></a>and have great respect for other Roman Catholic authors including Flannery O’Connor, J.R.R. Tolkien, Malcolm Muggeridge, Walker Percy, Henri Nouwen, G.K. Chesterton, Graham Greene, and Thomas Merton.  What made “The Passion of Mary-Margaret,” a contemporary Roman Catholic novel, readable, was the simple and clear explanations of Roman Catholicisms.  And that is where The Soul Reader completely fails.</p> <p>And now I must digress.  The two women find comfort in repeating “Holy Mary, mother of God, pray for us now and at the hour of our death. Amen.”  They repeat it over and over.  I have been to Roman Catholic funerals and seen and heard this.  Why not pray scripture?  Perhaps one of the Psalms?  From my perspective, reciting those words over and over is no different from reciting any word or words for meditation reasons.  Whether the word be Om or Jesus or Holy Mary, such repetition may be designed only to clear the mind for meditation.   If a Christian is in distress, as I believed these women were, why wouldn’t they call on Jesus, the author and finisher of faith?  Why wouldn’t they tell him how they feel?  Why wouldn’t they use an appropriate Psalm?  I often pray <a href="http://www.biblegateway.com/passage/?search=Psalm+121&version=NIV" target="_blank">Psalm 121</a> or <a href="http://www.biblegateway.com/passage/?search=Psalm%20139&version=NIV" target="_blank">Psalm 139</a> in my distress.   One of the women says that she thinks of <a href="http://www.biblegateway.com/passage/?search=Psalm+61&version=NIV" target="_blank">Psalm 61</a> while she is reciting the rosary, but that’s as far as it goes.  The Psalms are all directed to God in joy or distress or thanksgiving.  It seems to me, that if we’re calling on God is our distress, we’re going to want to directly entreat God as did our examples in the Bible,  and not call on the mother of Jesus, a practice nowhere mentioned in the Bible.    </p> <p>But, digression aside, let’s return to the text.  It is in the center of the novel where I became aware of Culebra’s identity before any of the novel’s characters knew his identity, and where I began to see the secret behind the Italian businessman.  At this point, I wondered if I even wanted to read through to the end.  I have read so many bad novels by Christian authors in the past year; I would love to be proven wrong about a book that started with so much promise.</p> <p>Did it prove me wrong in the end?  Partially.  There were a couple of twists I hadn’t anticipated.  There were also a couple of misspelled words, bad placement of the word “only,” one word used for its opposite meaning, and an office pulled out of thin air.  I was also irritated by the 28 times the author used the word “feature” instead of “face” or spiritual “state” or “condition.”  The author used the word “basically” three times in a single paragraph.  He used the word animal magnetism only once but once is too often in any writing.  I also found problems with simile and comparison.  Perhaps I am too literal, but does this work on any level?  </p> <blockquote> <p>. . . as insensitive to the feelings of others as a buzzard would be to the feelings of roadkill.</p> </blockquote> <p>Or how about this comparison?</p> <blockquote> <p>Mercy was more foreign than Mercury. . . </p> </blockquote> <p>No, there was no science fiction or space travel in this novel and no consideration of the night sky.</p> <p>This Soul Reader was a good start for this author.  With a good editor, he could lose the middle and the very end and add some real passion and emotion rather than a “chaste kiss,” He might then have a book full of exciting moments.  As the book stands, however, only a Roman Catholic reader might truly enjoy it.  </p> <p>I received this book free from the publisher. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255.</p> Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-76297505756797116882011-10-07T07:09:00.001-04:002011-10-07T07:09:47.314-04:00When I Wanted to Quit the Church<p>Have you ever wanted to quit church?  Perhaps you never started.  Here is the story of why I wanted to quit church and why I ended up staying.</p> <p>Seventh grade was the worst year of my life.  </p> <p>Fourth grade had been the worst year.  New school, new city, no friends.  Even though I loved the quiet area where we lived, I felt like I was drifting through life, like I was being done to rather than doing.  I wasn’t yet old enough to see the light ahead.  </p> <p>Following fourth grade, fifth grade was the worst year of my life.  New school, new city, no friends, and a densely populated area.  Life was horrible at home and I only wanted to hide under my desk at school.  My walk from school took me past a library.  I hid in my room and read books.</p> <p>After fifth grade, sixth grade was the worst year of my life.  Same school, same city, no friends.  I grew my hair long and continued to cart home as many library books as I could carry.  In school I hid behind my long hair and at home I hid in the books I read.     </p> <p>But seventh grade was the worst of all.  Same city, new school, no friends; it was the other changes that brought new lows.  I no longer passed a library on my walk to school and I was expected to go to school dances and participate in school  and church activities.  </p> <p>The high points:  I had a poem published in the school paper and I met a friend.  It wasn’t a particularly good poem and we were friends for all of the wrong reasons.  We were the kind of friends who never spent the night at each other’s house.  So what made us friends?  We were the ones who didn’t fit in.  We went to dances and agreed not to dance so neither of us could feel bad that we weren’t asked.  We went out for cheerleading knowing that we both would fail.  This friendship of avoidance and failure ended when I left that school after two years.  </p> <p>The low point:  my search for meaning.  I was enrolled in catechism classes that year.  They were taught by the pastor of the church.  I loved church.  I loved the music, the liturgy.  It was a place of safety and security.  The one place with the promise of “all is well and all will be well.”  My heart leapt with the words of the Te Deum Laudamus (We Praise Thee, O God) which we sang as a sort of chant.  </p> <blockquote> <p><em>We praise thee, O God : <br />    we acknowledge thee to be the Lord. <br />All the earth doth worship thee : <br />    the Father everlasting. <br />To thee all Angels cry aloud : <br />    the Heavens, and all the Powers therein. <br />To thee Cherubim and Seraphim : <br />    continually do cry, <br />Holy, Holy, Holy : <br />    Lord God of Sabaoth*; </em></p> <p><em> <br />Heaven and earth are full of the Majesty : <br />    of thy glory. <br />The glorious company of the Apostles : praise thee. <br />The goodly fellowship of the Prophets : praise thee. <br />The noble army of Martyrs : praise thee. <br />The holy Church throughout all the world : <br />    doth acknowledge thee. . . <br /></em></p> </blockquote> <p>But the same man who led that church couldn’t be bothered with the questions of pre-teen girl  searching for meaning.  I don’t remember what I asked; nor do I remember the response.  I only remember that his response ridiculed me in front of the others in that catechism class.   I begged my mother to let me drop out, but she refused.  I begged to stay home from church, but she refused that, also.  </p> <p>I finished the class and to this day remember only these words:  “I will fear and love God,” a phrase that appropriately states the ambiguity of faith.  But I had no room for ambiguity in my life; fear overwhelmed love.  I finished that class without asking any more questions, donned the white robe, and was subsequently accepted into the church, a church that was no longer safe and secure.  A church of hypocrisy and fear.   </p> <p>And yet, I knew there was something more. Somewhere.  </p> <p>Now an adult,  I know that all churches are filled with the same types of people we find anywhere else:  the broken narcissists, the depressed hypocrites, the maudlin pundits.  (Yes, I had to throw them in to lighten this dire non-diatribe.)  But the churches I respect most are those where the people realize their own lack and look to Jesus, where they acknowledge that we live in a stasis between what is and what should be, and where none of us is bigger than God.  </p> <p>Yes, I said “we” and “us.” I cannot leave the church because, as it hobbles along, its crutch is Jesus and that’s the same secure aid I need in my life.  And the people hobbling with me are the ones I need to be with in my worst of times and my best. </p> <p>But I will never stop searching; not for the best church or the best people, but for the best life lived in Christ in his church.  I want to stand in the church of the here and the yet to come, the church of the crumpled and crushed, the church of the damaged and destroyed, the church without pretension.  As part of that church, I am part of something bigger and more important than an Ohio State Football game and its fickle fans (no pun intended.).  As part of that church, my life has greater purpose than I could have ever envisioned.</p> <p>Church is the place of the holy ones of God who are called together through wars and hardship, wins and losses, struggles and pain, to lie prostrate, kneel, or stand and worship the Lord of Heaven and Earth.  Here is where I join the saints, angels, and martyrs to shout, sing or whimper, “Holy, Holy, Holy.” Here is where “the saints go marching in” and I do, do, do “want to be in that number.”</p> <blockquote><dl><dd><em>We are trav'ling in the footsteps </em></dd><dd><em>Of those who've gone before, </em></dd><dd><em>And we'll all be reunited, </em></dd><dd><em>On a new and sunlit shore, </em></dd></dl><dl><dd><em>Oh, when the saints go marching in </em></dd><dd><em>Oh, when the saints go marching in </em></dd><dd><em>Lord, how I want to be in that number </em></dd><dd><em>When the saints go marching in </em></dd></dl><dl><dd><em>And when the sun refuse to shine </em></dd><dd><em>And when the sun refuse to shine </em></dd><dd><em>Lord, how I want to be in that number </em></dd><dd><em>When the sun refuse to shine </em></dd></dl><dl><dd><em>And when the moon turns red with blood </em></dd><dd><em>And when the moon turns red with blood </em></dd><dd><em>Lord, how I want to be in that number </em></dd><dd><em>When the moon turns red with blood </em></dd></dl><dl><dd><em>Oh, when the trumpet sounds its call </em></dd><dd><em>Oh, when the trumpet sounds its call </em></dd><dd><em>Lord, how I want to be in that number </em></dd><dd><em>When the trumpet sounds its call </em></dd></dl><dl><dd><em>Some say this world of trouble, </em></dd><dd><em>Is the only one we need, </em></dd><dd><em>But I'm waiting for that morning, </em></dd><dd><em>When the new world is revealed. </em></dd></dl><dl><dd><em>Oh When the new world is revealed </em></dd><dd><em>Oh When the new world is revealed </em></dd><dd><em>Lord, how I want to be in that number </em></dd><dd><em>When the new world is revealed </em></dd></dl><dl><dd><em>Oh, when the saints go marching in </em></dd><dd><em>Oh, when the saints go marching in </em></dd><dd><em>Lord, how I want to be in that number </em></dd><dd><em>When the saints go marching in </em></dd></dl></blockquote> <p>Does your heart cry to be in that number?  Do you feel outcast, rejected?  As I was writing this, I happened upon a <a href="http://youtu.be/Ze5nCEmiamQ" target="_blank">video</a> that may say it better.  And no, going back to church doesn’t have to happen on September 18, December 25, or any other propitious date.  Whenever you go, it is the right time.  </p> <p>If you are looking for a church like the one in the video or the one that I want, don’t be afraid to ask me for a recommendation.  Here are two I recommend:  <a href="http://vineyardcolumbus.org/" target="_blank">Vineyard Church of Columbus</a>, <a href="http://www.vineyardchillicothe.com/" target="_blank">Vineyard Chillicothe</a>.  And there are many others.  Please leave a comment and let me know whether your pain kept you from church or brought you to church.  </p> <p>I leave you with a lighter <a href="http://helpwithmycomputer.net/images/Nancy Honeytree - Go to Church.mp3" target="_blank">song</a> from the early 1980’s.</p> <p><em>*Sabaoth is the Anglicizing of the Latinizing of the Greek of the Hebrew word for “armies.”</em></p> Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-51368368738682484872011-10-04T14:39:00.000-04:002011-10-04T14:39:41.183-04:00Camping in Georgia by D. Harkness<div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">Camping in Georgia</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><br />
</div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">The darkest dark of moonless night</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">around that Georgia lake</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">the tent went up by car headlight</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">the poles, the nylon, and the stakes</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><br />
</div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">Happy to be safe inside</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">we touched, we kissed, and more</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">the night was warm and as we drowsed</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">the water lapped the shore</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><br />
</div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">But terrors of the night abound</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">which ears and flesh invade</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">and unseen creepy crawly things</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">a camper's nightmare preys</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><br />
</div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">Just a dream I knew it was</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">until I felt it there</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">and in the light I knew it true</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">creepy crawly in my hair</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><br />
</div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">First love, now rape</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">in every crevice every pore</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">ants within and on my skin</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">ants covering the floor</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><br />
</div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">Grabbing cover; To the showers!</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">No quiet sleep that night</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">the car seat was the bed of choice</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">until the first daylight.</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><br />
</div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">The brightest bright of Georgia day</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">showed truly where we faltered</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">the entire lakeside was their home</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">the ants thought we were squatters!</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><br />
</div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">The moral of this story strange</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">is not what you might expect</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">for only in that one state park</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">did ants arrive unchecked.</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">So never set the tent by dark</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">and never in that Georgia park</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">where ants control entire tracts</span></span></div><div align="center" style="line-height: normal; margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="line-height: 13pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;"><span style="color: black; font-size: 11pt;">and danger lurks behind your back.</span></span></span></div>Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-42234292520144544952011-10-01T19:42:00.001-04:002011-10-01T19:42:19.491-04:00The Scroll by Grant R. Jeffrey and Alton L. Gansky (A review)<p> <table border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody> <tr> <td><img src="http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/511j5kgFz4L._SL160_.jpg" /> </td> <td valign="top"><a href="http://www.amazon.com/Scroll-Novel-Grant-R-Jeffrey/dp/0307729265%3FSubscriptionId%3D0JTCV5ZMHMF7ZYTXGFR2%26tag%3Ddianaharkness-20%26linkCode%3Dxm2%26camp%3D2025%26creative%3D165953%26creativeASIN%3D0307729265">The Scroll: A Novel</a> </td> </tr> </tbody></table> The Scroll is a novel in which many of the characters are archaeologists.  Lest you immediately think of the dull painstaking removal of ancient dust by means of a small paintbrush, these archaeologists get right to business using the latest technology and reluctantly blowing holes in standard archeological practice, while avoiding having holes blown in themselves.  </p> <p>Dr. David Chambers is the lead archaeologist, ready to change archeological and life direction until called back to Israel by his mentor, Abram Ben-Judah, to lead a group looking for treasure places described by a copper scroll discovered in the Qumran area.  The novel gives the reader a taste of current archeological method including the difficulty in deciphering ancient text and location when spelling, iconography, and geography have changed or disappeared in time.   We are also introduced to new methods of surveying beneath the earth’s surface for long buried evidence.</p> <p>The story is a straightforward archaeological mystery,  intertwined with a volatile political situation.  There is love and death and subterfuge, but this novel cannot be described as suspenseful or romantic.  Although the character of David Chambers is multi-faceted, the other characters appeared one-dimensional.  I was left wishing for more danger, more action, more emotion, and better characterization.  I was wishing for anything to make me feel something for the characters.  If this novel is made into a movie, I definitely want to see it.  </p> <p>The Scroll is an easy read for a summer beach or a winter fire, especially if you are interested in Biblical archeology.  </p> <p>I received this book free from the publisher.  I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255.</p> Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-71385578997219811172011-09-28T08:08:00.001-04:002011-09-28T08:08:01.530-04:00Unpacking Creative Speculative Non-Fiction<p>When I plan a vacation, my first thought is the box of books.  Which can I finish?  Which will inspire me?  Which will propel me forward in life?  I stare at the piles of books and the corrugated box.  I want to include everything and nothing.  I want the selected few, but I don’t know which fall into that category.  Should I take the books waiting to be reviewed or the ones I didn’t finish last year or the year before or the year before that?    </p> <p>This year, I became wise.  I took one fiction book <table border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody> <tr> <td><img src="http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/510lY95cJyL._SL160_.jpg" /> </td> <td valign="top"><a href="http://www.amazon.com/Valley-Bones-Jerusalems-Undead-Trilogy/dp/B004IEA35G%3FSubscriptionId%3D0JTCV5ZMHMF7ZYTXGFR2%26tag%3Ddianaharkness-20%26linkCode%3Dxm2%26camp%3D2025%26creative%3D165953%26creativeASIN%3DB004IEA35G">Valley of Bones (Jerusalem's Undead Trilogy)</a> </td> </tr> </tbody></table> </p> <p> </p> <p> </p> <p>one book of creative non-fiction  <table border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody> <tr> <td><img src="http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/51FMEXVD2JL._SL160_.jpg" /> </td> <td valign="top"><a href="http://www.amazon.com/Devil-White-City-Madness-Changed/dp/0375725601%3FSubscriptionId%3D0JTCV5ZMHMF7ZYTXGFR2%26tag%3Ddianaharkness-20%26linkCode%3Dxm2%26camp%3D2025%26creative%3D165953%26creativeASIN%3D0375725601">The Devil in the White City: Murder, Magic, and Madness at the Fair that Changed America</a> </td> </tr> </tbody></table> </p> <p> </p> <p>an academic book I have been reading  <table border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody> <tr> <td><img src="http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/519sokyK-lL._SL160_.jpg" /> </td> <td valign="top"><a href="http://www.amazon.com/Reliability-Old-Testament-K-Kitchen/dp/0802803962%3FSubscriptionId%3D0JTCV5ZMHMF7ZYTXGFR2%26tag%3Ddianaharkness-20%26linkCode%3Dxm2%26camp%3D2025%26creative%3D165953%26creativeASIN%3D0802803962">On the Reliability of the Old Testament</a> </td> </tr> </tbody></table> </p> <p>and my Kindle which contains my Bible and other books.</p> <p> </p> <p>So how did I do with the reading?  I never picked up Valley of Bones.  I never picked up On the Reliability of the Old Testament.  I completely finished The Devil in the White City.  And I read a few out of print short stories on my Kindle.</p> <p>The Devil in the White City is a work of creative non-fiction.  I am not completely convinced that this genre should even exist.  Creative non-fiction is factual writing mixed with “what could have happened.”  Now, if you take this to its extreme, it is historical fiction.  Historical fiction is a fictional story set in a historical period.  Could it have happened?  Maybe.  </p> <p>The Devil in the White City is a true story set in a historical period with what may or may not be fictional elements.  I am writing a series of novels about the Prophet Elijah.  What we know about him would not fill a single book.  However I have set his story in its historical time and included elements of modern thought, technology, clothing, etc.  How would I have to modify my novel to make it creative non-fiction?  I could take out the modern elements, thought, and place names.  What then?  The characters I invented could have existed.  There is no evidence for or against their existence.  The action I wrote could have taken place.  There is no evidence for or against it.  </p> <p>Others have told me that my fiction is speculative fiction.  How about creative speculative non-fiction?  If I include footnotes will that make my novel non-fiction?  </p> <p>And what is true?  If we add what might have been and call it “creative” is it still true?  And if it is not true, can it be called “non-fiction.”  I have always believed that the untrue was fiction.  Have we so blurred the lines of demarcation that we no longer call what is true, non-fiction?</p> <p>There is a <a href="http://riverteethjournal.wordpress.com/conference/" target="_blank">writers conference</a> in the spring on narrative non-fiction.  If I attend will they answer my questions?</p> <p>What do you think about all of this?</p> Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-63314058748339400582011-09-17T17:12:00.001-04:002011-09-17T17:12:31.388-04:00Authors that Disappoint: A Review of Two Books<p>I recently had the opportunity to read two novels:  one by a best-selling Christian author I have long known and read, the other by an author I had never heard of.  The first book is <u>One Step Away</u> by Eric Wilson; the second, <u>Indelible</u> by Kristen Heitzmann.</p> <p>These novels are set in the current time, in recognizable places in the United States.  What both novels also share is unexpected poor writing.  Let me qualify the remarks that follow by noting that <u>One Step Away</u> was in paper book format, <u>Indelible</u> in Kindle format. </p> <p>Both books suffer from grammar and punctuation errors.  The first is homonym confusion.  Homonyms are words that sound alike or similar but have different meanings.  For example, you can <em>pique</em> someone’s interest, but you cannot <em>peak </em>their interest.  That was an actual example of homonym confusion from <u>Indelible</u>.  Other words were simply wrong and I suspect the author consulted a thesaurus rather than a dictionary.  Among these are <em>canted</em> which is never something done with a neck as the author states and a word not used at all in this time; <em>spewed</em> which is poured out of something, not as the author used it for rocks sliding away from a trail runner.  And two characters <em>drive </em>their hands; one into dense clay which is an acceptable use, one into water, which is not.  <u>One Step Away</u> contained missing words.  </p> <p>The worst offender, <u>Indelible, </u>contained hyphenated words that should not be hyphenated and  individual words that should be hyphenated left unhyphenated.  Some paragraphs were indented; some weren’t.   Some phrases were in a much larger font than the rest of the book.   Some words were combined which should have been spaced.  Finally, the letter “r” or “S” in a different font was inserted sporadically.  </p> <p><u>One Step Away</u> contained characters that acted out of character, creating unbelievable characters and a predictable plot.  <u>Indelible</u> had characters with silly names and a predictable plot.  <u>Indelible</u> used at least one unbelievable metaphor (eg. disturbed leaves in a rocky mountain stream compared to goldfish—which would never be found in a cold Colorado creek) and other descriptive terms pulled inappropriately from other disciplines (eg. <em>segue</em>, a musical term).  Possibly <u>Indelible’s</u> most inexcusable error was to use bits of the the epic poem, Paradise Lost, pulled out of context to drive a subplot.    </p> <p>To be fair, <u>Indelible ‘s</u> author had greater dexterity in describing scenes and places than did the author of <u>One Step Away</u>.  But I found myself racing to the end of both books merely to be done with them.  Do authors realize how much grammatical errors distract from their writing?  Have publishers stopped editing?  What more can I say about these books?  If you want to read a well-written novel, stay away from both of them.</p> <p> </p> <p>I was provided a free review copy of <u>Indelible</u> by the publisher for the purpose of this review.  I purchased my copy of <u>One Step Away</u>.</p> Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6747208510258471960.post-13039663265815742912011-08-25T12:49:00.001-04:002011-08-25T12:49:18.291-04:00My Review of Surprised by Oxford: A Memoir by Carolyn Weber<table border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody> <tr> <td><img src="http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/41EpceZ7vFL._SL160_.jpg" /> </td> <td valign="top"><a href="http://www.amazon.com/Surprised-Oxford-Memoir-Carolyn-Weber/dp/0849946115%3FSubscriptionId%3D0JTCV5ZMHMF7ZYTXGFR2%26tag%3Dbrdicr-20%26linkCode%3Dxm2%26camp%3D2025%26creative%3D165953%26creativeASIN%3D0849946115">Surprised by Oxford: A Memoir</a> </td> </tr> </tbody></table> <p><u><a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0849946115/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&tag=dianaharkness-20&linkCode=as2&camp=217145&creative=399369&creativeASIN=0849946115" target="_blank">Surprised by Oxford</a></u> encompasses Carolyn Weber’s first year of graduate studies in literature at Oxford University. From this Canadian native’s mishaps with British busses, to the memorable professors, colorful students, and descriptions of student life at Oxford, there is never a boring chapter. Weber shows us her search for a true life course, rather than her coursework. From time to time the linear pattern based on the sessions at Oxford, digresses to reveal her less than perfect childhood, but never to the point of self-indulgence. Brief glimpses of her family show a selfish and absentee father, balanced by a tight-knit family of mother, sister, and brother. From the time she arrives at Oxford, Carolyn “Caro” Weber’s world view is confronted by the literature she reads and by her fellow students and professors. Reluctantly she sees her life change in a way she had never imagined.</p> <p>Now, before I continue I must state that I don’t read memoirs. Why would I want someone else’s memories when I cannot fully appreciate my own? I would not have read this one were it not for the word Oxford in the title. Oxford summons for me all the mystery of cloistered halls inhabited with the characters and spirits of, among others, C. S. Lewis, (“and now the bridge is breaking. . .”); J.R.R. Tolkien (“A man that flies from his fear may find that he has only taken a short cut to meet it.”); Thomas Hobbes (Appetite, with an opinion of attaining, is called hope; the same, without such opinion, despair.”); John Locke (“The end of law is not to abolish or restrain, but to preserve and enlarge freedom.”); and John Donne (“More than kisses, letters mingle souls.”) How could I refuse such a book, if it would, only in snatches, put me in the presence of such as these. I love Oxford for the writers it has nourished, who have then nourished me.</p> <p>But, on to the book. I fully expected to hate it as a memoir, but the more I read the more I wanted to read. I soaked up every quote at the beginning of each chapter and the quotes within, quotes from U2 and the Beatles to poets, poets, and more poets. I found myself laughing at her mishaps and cringing at her pain. When I finished reading, I found myself wanting to stand in Oxford with her. I wanted to eavesdrop on her conversations. I wanted to know her friends. Beyond every pain and the paradox, she found joy. And when it all came to a close, it became a small love story within a larger love story that overcame the author’s doubts as she learned to live with paradox and promise. It very much reminded me in some intangible way of <u><a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0151001855/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&tag=dianaharkness-20&linkCode=as2&camp=217145&creative=399369&creativeASIN=0151001855" target="_blank">Surprised by Joy</a></u> by C.S. Lewis.<img src="http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/51z6eFxL-2L._SL160_.jpg" /></p> <p><u><a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0849946115/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&tag=dianaharkness-20&linkCode=as2&camp=217145&creative=399369&creativeASIN=0849946115" target="_blank">Surprised by Oxford</a></u> makes you want to stop and listen; to ask questions along with the author, the same questions she was asking. Why does God let babies die? Why do horrible things happen if there is a loving God? Why are people so evil? Why does everyone else have it all together and I can’t seem to catch up? How does Christian faith work in real life, in academia? These are questions I have asked, and some that I ask still.</p> <p><u><a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0849946115/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&tag=dianaharkness-20&linkCode=as2&camp=217145&creative=399369&creativeASIN=0849946115" target="_blank">Surprised by Oxford</a></u> is a book written by a writer who loves the English language and shows it. She uses British terms and spelling but never without an explanation. Some other reviewers found this to be a problem, but I enjoyed experiencing Oxford life, Briticisms and all. I recently read another memoir by another literature grad student and found it so dull I could barely finish it. <u><a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0849946115/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&tag=dianaharkness-20&linkCode=as2&camp=217145&creative=399369&creativeASIN=0849946115" target="_blank">Surprised by Oxford</a> <table border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody> <tr> <td> </td> <td valign="top"><a href="http://www.amazon.com/Surprised-Joy-Shape-Early-Life/dp/B002VPEAFI%3FSubscriptionId%3D0JTCV5ZMHMF7ZYTXGFR2%26tag%3Dbrdicr-20%26linkCode%3Dxm2%26camp%3D2025%26creative%3D165953%26creativeASIN%3DB002VPEAFI">Surprised by Joy: The Shape of My Early Life</a> </td> </tr> </tbody></table> </u>is in a different class, one that instead of dragging the reader down, lifts the reader up and inspires the reader to ask questions. If you wonder whether Jesus is for you, this is the book you should read. If you love literature, this is a book for you. If you want Jesus and literature, this is the book.</p> <p>I received this book free from the publisher through the BookSneeze®.com book review bloggers program. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255.</p> Unknownnoreply@blogger.com4